When you apply for a position, you have to present yourself. The documents you send for your application are your chance to provide a glimpse of who you are and what you stand for.
I recently had the opportunity to review more than a dozen applications for a PhD position. Being on the other side of the fence was a revealing experience. It would be great if everyone that applies was once in the position to judge such applications. Here are some of the things I learnt:
Dear esteemed Sir,
I look to go for doctoral studies to refine my knowledge and skills in my areas of interest ...
If you know the name of the person to whom your application is to be sent, address it directly. If you do not know it, find it out. And if you cannot name the area, you will have a hard time convincing anybody of your interest.
They are the one judging, and you telling them that they should choose you won’t make them forget that they are the ones who take the decision. In fact, it is annoying to be told what to think, and the reaction tends to be to reject the suggestion. Instead of trying to force the conclusion that you are the fittest person for the job, just pinpoint what you think is important and relevant from your past, and let them decide.
For example, don’t just say: I worked there in that domain. Tell them why did you choose to go there, and why that domain. Give them a hint of the way you think.